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Swarm II: Revenge of the Swarm by Orangeandbluecream Swarm II: Revenge of the Swarm by Orangeandbluecream
Title card I made for Animation studio class. Everyone in the class had to make one, I have no idea if mine'll be used in the short or not. I doubt it, but y'know, it was still fun to draw...

I also got to do the character designs for the short... I was excited. XD Though I can't take complete credit for the woman, Casey did the turn around based on my design.
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Crysenley Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I still think it's so cool how you got to be the character designer. :la: I love her hair!
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Orangeandbluecream Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks! :D
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Crysenley Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome~
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Alistu Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Open to a little crit?
The colours, smoke and lighting look great. I also really like the woman's design. Very funky hair. :)
Composition-wise though it feels a bit empty. I feel as though there should maybe have been more shadowy figures filling the grey void in the middle of the image. It is a swarm after all, right?
The thing that imeditately stood out to me though, apart from that brilliant toxic shade of green, was how broken the woman's little finger looks. Even with the hand at that angle, the little finger should still follow the general direction of the other fingers.
I hope this little bit of feedback is useful to you in some way. :)
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Orangeandbluecream Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Sure!

Thanks, I wouldn't have gone with acid green personally, but the colors were chosen by other class mates. I probably should have played with the logo/character placement then, because there is only one monster bug in the short, the rest are little robot bugs. XD

Yeah... the finger does look weird now that it's been pointed out. XD her shoulders bug me too... I always sucked at shoulders for some reason. D=
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Alistu Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Perhaps. There does seem to be quite a lot of negative space.
Her shoulder doesn't bother me. As her arm is raised, it makes sense that her shoulder should be slightly raised as well.
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KayIscah Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Professional General Artist
I'd second Alistu on adding another shadow creature or two into the gray portion.

The finger doesn't bother me, but I think the shadowing is a bit too heavy on the woman. The additional shadow through the center of her image makes her recede too much rather than pop forward.

Are we going to be able to see the short? I'm very curious.
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Orangeandbluecream Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Can't it's based off the short and there is only one monster bug.

I might be able to post the parts I animated... I have no idea if they are going to post it on youtube are anything.
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KayIscah Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Professional General Artist
Ah, well if it's story appropriate, never mind...

Please let me know if you do.
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ThunderWolfang Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now that's cool! :la:
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Orangeandbluecream Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks! :D
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ThunderWolfang Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome! :D
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